A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.

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met
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summer. I’m happy to hear that you’re planning to go
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camping holiday for the
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time and I’m very welcome that you ask for my advice. A camping holiday is a good idea and I
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that you will get many good experiences from
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trip. I would recommend you to find
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near the mountain and close to the river
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you can enjoy watching the animals going out at night. Even if it would be
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enjoyable trip, it has
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that you should take
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area
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that you must not
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enter because it’s wild
animals
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areas. I would suggest you
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some officer to make sure where is the safe area for you. I would love to join and spend time with you for the trip
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summer. It would be a good time for us to do something together.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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