In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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It has been observed that the population is exponentially growing in many urban pockets of the world. To mitigate
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issue,
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Government officials are asking the dwellers as well as the companies to shift
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the countryside.
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, from my perspective, the demerits may overpower the merits in
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a scenario. In the upcoming paragraphs, I would like to shed some light on the same. On the one hand, a
city
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bolsters developed transportation facilities that
makes
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commuting
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for the working and non-working class.
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, the authorities spend
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amount of the budget to build urban
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infrastructures
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as roads,
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and highways. Major airports and railway stations are strategically placed for the business
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personnel
to work efficiently by travelling day in and day out.
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, in villages, travelling for work may take
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duration and people may keep coming back to
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to fly domestically or internationally.
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,
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will waste man working hours.
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, the natural beauty and fresh breeze of villages will be
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exploited
with the organisations moving there. Construction work will abundantly increase, which may spoil the
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scene
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serene
environemnt
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environment
.
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, space will be required to build new offices, buildings and many more, which may lead to deforestation.
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, modern facilities are at disposal for the urbanities, so
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crowd will slowly replicate these
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amenities
in the rural
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.
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, we may fail to
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preserve
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rural life. To summarise, though the Government has been suggesting companies and residents
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shift their base, it is not a pragmatic option because
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, rail and flying connectivity
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much stronger in the
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area.
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, a paradigm shift will be seen in rural life as urban people may start developing the countryside and
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spoil
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nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overpopulation
  • urban congestion
  • quality of life
  • pollution
  • infrastructure
  • public services
  • economic development
  • job opportunities
  • local economies
  • affordable housing
  • standard of living
  • well-being
  • isolation
  • amenities
  • healthcare
  • education facilities
  • entertainment facilities
  • community ties
  • social networks
  • environmental degradation
  • ecosystems
  • biodiversity
  • development
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