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You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

#complaint #hotel #organizer #company #face
Dear
sor
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sir
 or madam, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you regarding a face some problems in your hotel. I was
last
 two ago stayed at while attending a meeting in your hotel . I
was
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booked
room
 number 123 and
meeting
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the meeting
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was
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started
on
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at
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 9.30 morning
in
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last
 Monday.
Moreover
, the meeting was started
in
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at
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 10 am and employees had come
in
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at
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 9.30 am . After that meeting was started related on company business. The meeting was going very well but the
room
 lights
was
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were
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connection
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 off shoat the plug
shoue
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should
shore
showed
 . It was very difficult to continue the meeting.
Furthermore
, After that
i
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calling
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 the reception to send the staff
in
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to
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room
 number 123 . The staff members will
be come
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become
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 and check the problem and he was donot able to solutions the problem. After
me
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I
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 and
employees
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the employees
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 open the
room
 window and
able
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were able
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 to continue the meeting. I am some
saguation
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situation
 for you any problem in
room
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the room
a room
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 you will one
room
 able to send people
continue
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to continue
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 our work.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 sincerely, Dharma
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