You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done
Dear
sor
or madam,
I am writing Correct your spelling
sir
this
letter to inform you regarding a face some problems in your hotel. I was last
two ago stayed at while attending a meeting in your hotel . I was
booked Unnecessary verb
apply
room
number 123 and meeting
Correct article usage
the meeting
was
started Unnecessary verb
apply
on
9.30 morning Change preposition
at
in
Change preposition
apply
last
Monday.
Moreover
, the meeting was started in
10 am and employees had come Change the preposition
at
in
9.30 am . After that meeting was started related on company business. The meeting was going very well but the Change the preposition
at
room
lights was
Change the verb form
were
connection
off shoat the plug Replace the word
connected
shoue
. It was very difficult to continue the meeting.
Correct your spelling
should
shore
showed
Furthermore
, After that i
Change the capitalization
I
calling
the reception to send the staff Change the form of the verb
called
in
Change preposition
to
room
number 123 . The staff members will be come
and check the problem and he was donot able to solutions the problem. After Correct your spelling
become
me
and Change the pronoun
I
employees
open the Correct article usage
the employees
room
window and able
to continue the meeting.
I am some Add a missing verb
were able
saguation
for you any problem in Correct your spelling
situation
room
you will one Add an article
the room
a room
room
able to send people continue
our work.
Add the particle
to continue
Correct the word
Yours
Your
sincerely,
DharmaCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite