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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing

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In the current era,
job
 satisfaction is the most important thing in every person's life. It was a feeling of achievement, which
people
 can experience
by
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through
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 their jobs. High levels of jobs tend to be more profitable. I will scrutinize both the factors and
expectation
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expectations
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 of
job
 satisfaction and highlight my perception at the end. To commence with, there are umpteen reasons which
contributes
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 to
job
 gladness,
Firstly
, the salary is a crucial part of each and every profession, high salaries encourage
people
 to do more
work
.
Secondly
,
the
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work
 environment, if
people
 get positive comments from co-
workers
 and managers, they
work
 more and try to do the
work
 better with good skills.
Thirdly
, their working methods, if a person can
work
 better than others, which is done by more capabilities than it is
also
 profitable for the
company
.
Thus
, it could be
chance
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 to get
promotion
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a promotion
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 for the person.
Majority
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The majority
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 of
people
work
 hard during their adult period
,
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 because at the time their impulses are increased and they
also
 have responsibilities for their family.
As a result
, they give their full efforts
on
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to
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work
 and try to get more salary to fulfilling their
families
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family's
families'
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 needs.
Furthermore
, employees have several expectations of their
job
 with some demands. One significant thing is securing their
job
 in future, To specify it, they want to
safe
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save
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 their position at their
job
 place at all
time
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times
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, because there are some natural calamities which must not harm the
workers
'
work
. Employees are not only
work
 in the
company
 but
also
 live like a family
members
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member
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 with
others
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other
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people
, they expect to celebrate some functions
on
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of
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 the
company
, like weekly achievement programs,
workers
 of the month, their annual bonus and trip once
in
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apply
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a year with staff members,
that is
 the reason, that
this activities
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this activity
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 can
be create
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create
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 a great bond between companies members. To sum up, there are many factors which contribute to
job
 satisfaction,
likewise
, the
job
 enjoyment which every
workers
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worker
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 want, but it possible once in a while. So, I think other
workers
 should try to
work
 hard to get an achievement from the
company
.
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