Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Imagine a corporate workplace, the

first

thing that will come to many of our minds will be, how nicely the employees would be dressed?

This

is a very hot topic of discussion in many debates

also

. Many are in support of wearing casual

clothes

or comfortable

clothes

in the workplace and

in contrast

, some think that having a

dress

code helps in increasing productivity. Dressing up nicely boosts the confidence of every individual and that confidence helps to have a positive attitude towards tasks to be faced during the day. When you get ready for bed at night you need

clothes

that are loose, soft, and comfortable and

this

puts you in the mode of restfulness and, for sure no one can sleep in a tuxedo

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. Going to work in the same

clothes

that you wear the night before, you will feel dizzy all day even if you are working. The number of multinational companies (Goldman Sachs, JP Morgan, Citi Bank, HSBC Bank, and many more) having a formal

dress

code is more compared to the companies having informal ones. Doing tasks

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clothes

you feel comfortable while working increases your capability to do more. Sometimes it becomes very stressful to maintain formal

clothes

and

also

work at the same time one part of the brain will always be worried about the

dress

this

definitely decreases your focus and

hence

you will struggle to give one hundred

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. Google is the best example of having high productivity of employees in the world and has no formal

dress

code. As far as my opinion I think dressing casually and formally both have importance. It depends on what will be required at the office if I have a presentation to be given to our client I would

dress

formally and if I have to work just by sitting, I would wear some comfortable

clothes

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