You would like a temporary job working in a summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp. In your letter: 1. Explain what sort of job you would like to do. 2. Describe your personality. 3. Say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear/Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my interest in a temporary job at summer camp as I am good at planning
sports
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and outdoor activities.I have a couple of years of training experience in running and I can
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extend my support to other
sports
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such
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as tennis and swimming as well. If required I can take charge as an event organiser as per the need basis. I am very much healthy and perfectly all right to apply to
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position as I received a doctor's certificate for my physical and mental health conditions.
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, having enough height and weight is an advantage to train the
sports
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students. I can work during the night as well as I would prefer to sleep for a limited time only. Despite, having a couple of years of experience in
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training at a local school, I can
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teach swimming techniques to young people. I did my degree in
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-related training topics and I am a topper in the university. If required I would happy to provide my current employer reference as part of the verification. Please feel free to drop a note to me if you need any additional details regarding my skills and experience. I look forward to hearing your response to
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request and hope that I will get it soon. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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