You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to report
a
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issue with my Dell
Laptop
which I purchased from your shop,
last
month. I am facing a problem while working. The
laptop
got
retsrated
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restarted
retreated
after every hour and stuck at
blue
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a blue
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screen. I need to forcefully shut down it to start again.
First
I
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thought
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though
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, it is due to
operating
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system. But, I reinstall the operating system, but the problem remains unresolved.
Firstly
, My work is to write the
softwares
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software
for mobile devices.
Thus
, before
start
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work, I need to start various tools which took 15 to 20 minutes to load on every start.
This
is wasting my time.
Secondly
,
some times
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I do not get the chance to save my work and I need to do it again. It
is seems
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like it has a hardware issue. So, I want you to raise
this
to dell company as the
laptop
is
in
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under warranty.
Also
, I need a
laptop
on rent until
this
laptop
got fixed. Let me know when
i
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can
tak
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take
talk
emy
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my
laptop
for repair and pick up the
laptop
on
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rent. I am waiting for your response. Yours
faitfully
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faithfully
, Parminder Singh
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