The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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spread over the world. Some claim that online shopping will be very popular in the near future

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others disagree with them. In

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essay, we will explore the reasons for preferring online shopping and

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explain why the advantages of virtual platforms outweigh physical shops.

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, there are lots of upsides to preferring internet shopping including fast, reliability and many options.

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and foremost, multi-options attract customers and give them many choices.

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, even if you go to a big mall, it is possible not to find the goods you look for.

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, you can buy an item not only in a district but

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around the world.

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but not least, since time is money, normal shopping habits eat your time

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you do not want to waste your time.

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, you can only buy a few goods at physical markets since the online shop does not provide them including daily milk and hot coffee. When you are thirsty, you cannot order online whereas you can buy easily within 2 minutes in a grocery market. If you want to try the clothes, it is impossible online and

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you cannot touch, smell and feel them.

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, shopping not only offers buyers items but

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socializing. While you buy goods in the malls, you can interact with other people and communicate. In conclusion, shopping via the internet has lots of benefits while it has some drawbacks. In the near future, the number of shopping centres will decrease and online markets will increase. Many companies should adapt in terms of improvement in technology.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

Some people believe nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree to this statement?

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