You recently went on a trip and thought that the tour guide was particularly helpful. Now you would like to show him/ her your appreciation. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter describe the tour explain why you liked the tour guide say what you would like the manager to do to reward the tour guide

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to you to appreciate one of the tour guides working in your company.
Last
month, I visited a mesmerising city in Rajasthan namely Alwar. My family
also
accompanied me during
this
trip and we hired a person as a guide from your esteemed organization. We had a good journey over there. He helped a lot to explore that place. We went to a fort there, where he described its ancient history which impress my whole family.
Additionally
, he
also
captures group photographs for us which represent his cordial behaviour. In the evening time, we were at a park there and one of my cousins lost her handbag and that guide helps her to locate that bag.
Furthermore
, he was very gentle and calm. I would like to say that the person definitely deserves a reward from your side. So, I am requesting you to honour him so that others will
also
feel motivated and he gets recognition for his performance. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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