You are planning a tour with your family to a tourist destination. Write a letter to a hotel manager asking about the availability of accommodation for the days you will be here and also tell him what type of room you prefer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kajol Dave. I am writing to inquire about staying at your hotel with my family during our tour to that place. My family consists of my father, my aunt and uncle, and me. We will arrive on the 1st of June and want to stay till 15th June,

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we will stay 5 nights. We would prefer a double bedroom with a balcony to seat and spend the time at night. Would you please contact me as soon as possible with the details of charges regarding

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like to know about the nearest sightseeing places and how we can visit those sites. I would be grateful if you can advise about the games, parties and other activities that can engage my family when we are not sightseeing? Please contact me at the earliest with the details of rates. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Kajol Dave

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

160 words

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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