Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

Electricity
is important for powering industry and fueling transportation. The most essential thing for producing
electricity
is fossil
fuels
. If the earth has been
deplated
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depleted
of fossil
fuels
, we will face
of
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a point. In
this
essay I will explain
this
issue with some examples which are how can conserve and what are
fossil
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duels
alternatives
?
First
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we have to use
of
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low
consumption
electrical
appliances
. We must buy electrical
appliances
the reason is that those can help us
in
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conserve the fossil
fuels
with
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by
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using less
electricity
.
Secondly
, we should have
good
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timetable for using of
electricity
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appliances
during the day because power
consumption
is
in
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at
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high
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a high
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level in some hours.
Foe
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instance, noon is peak power
consumption
,
hence
we must use
of
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electricity
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appliances
in
early
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the early
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morning or at night.Solar
panel's
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panels
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can be
best
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alternatives
to fossil
fuels
.It can produce
electricity
through
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sunlight
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sun light
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sunlight
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and
putting
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it in every
places
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that have suitable sunlight.
For example
, these panels can produce necessary
electricity
for a car or big houses with high amenities. The
second
alternatives
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is wind turbines which can produce
electricity
through wind. The ocean is
safe
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place
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to put turbines because it will have less danger
for
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environment
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the environment
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and
human
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humans
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. In conclusion, we can conserve these resources
through
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by
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having
suitable
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a suitable
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timetable and buying low
consumption
appliances
. Fossil
fuels
can have really good
alternatives
such
as solar panels and wind turbines for producing
electricity
.
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