Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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Electricity

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is important for powering industry and fueling transportation. The most essential thing for producing

electricity

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is fossil

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. If the earth has been

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depleted

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electrical

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. We must buy electrical

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the reason is that those can help us

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conserve the fossil

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during the day because power

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level in some hours.

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early

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to fossil

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.It can produce

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through

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sunlight

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sun light

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that have suitable sunlight.

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for a car or big houses with high amenities. The

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is wind turbines which can produce

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through wind. The ocean is

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place

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to put turbines because it will have less danger

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environment

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the environment

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human

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. In conclusion, we can conserve these resources

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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An organisation has given an advertisement for part time volunteering job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organisation in your letter introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for this. Job State when you will be able to join

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.