Some people think that food is one of the most fundamental economic products and should be mostly produced by each country for its own consumption, with only minimal export of products to other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Over the
last
two decades, due to
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globalization, imports and exports of edibles
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gradually increased
between
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the
nations
.
Nevertheless
, Some individuals claim that groceries should be cultivated by the respective
countries
and decrease the shipment of products to other
countries
. I disagree with that as
the
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international trade is crucial to support each
others
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economy and
to
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combat climatic
conditions
.
To begin
with, for
the
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stable financial economy trading plays a vital role.
First
and foremost,
Although
some
countries
are economically strong they
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on other
nations
for
food
due to their climatic
conditions
.
For instance
, Dubai
don't
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have sufficient land to grow indispensable crops so their government imports most of their groceries from the Asia continent in exchange they export fossil fuel.
As a result
, both the source and destination get profitable.
Besides
financial stability, one cannot deny that climate is an important factor
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every country have an option to produce all crops.
For instance
, apple requires cold weather
conditions
so not possible to
grown
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in
a hot places
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like deserts in Dubai,
similarly
, Dates cannot
grown
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in colder places like Canada.
In addition
to climatic
conditions
,
due to
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lack of
rains
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rain
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or any other natural disasters can trigger scarcity
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as a result
such
places
has
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to rely on neighbours for their daily meals.
For example
, Some African
countries
due to lack of rain rely on their peers.
Finally
, to recapitulate,
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with out
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any doubt globalisation bought the
nations
together to share the
food
between
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each other. Some opine that
nations
should cultivate their own
food
instead
of importing/exporting.
However
, the international
food
trade is vital
due
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the above-mentioned strong arguments.
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