Some people think that food is one of the most fundamental economic products and should be mostly produced by each country for its own consumption, with only minimal export of products to other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Over the
last
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two decades, due to
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globalization, imports and exports of edibles
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gradually increased
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the
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, Some individuals claim that groceries should be cultivated by the respective
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and decrease the shipment of products to other
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. I disagree with that as
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international trade is crucial to support each
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economy and
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combat climatic
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stable financial economy trading plays a vital role.
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and foremost,
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some
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are economically strong they
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on other
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for
food
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due to their climatic
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, Dubai
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have sufficient land to grow indispensable crops so their government imports most of their groceries from the Asia continent in exchange they export fossil fuel.
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, both the source and destination get profitable.
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financial stability, one cannot deny that climate is an important factor
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every country have an option to produce all crops.
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, apple requires cold weather
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so not possible to
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in
a hot places
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like deserts in Dubai,
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, Dates cannot
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in colder places like Canada.
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to climatic
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,
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lack of
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or any other natural disasters can trigger scarcity
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as a result
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such
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places
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to rely on neighbours for their daily meals.
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, Some African
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due to lack of rain rely on their peers.
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, to recapitulate,
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with out
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any doubt globalisation bought the
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together to share the
food
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between
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each other. Some opine that
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should cultivate their own
food
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instead
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of importing/exporting.
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, the international
food
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trade is vital
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the above-mentioned strong arguments.
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