In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
Great
number of Change the article
A great
The great
people
try to Use synonyms
work
harder than other Use synonyms
people
. in Use synonyms
this
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essay
I will explain why Add a comma
,essay
people
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work
harder and it is always good.
Some Use synonyms
people
have big Use synonyms
problems
in their life that they have to Use synonyms
work
hard for solving these Use synonyms
problems
Use synonyms
such
as housing Linking Words
problem
and Fix the agreement mistake
problems
children
's school registration high fees. Use synonyms
For instance
, all Linking Words
children
must Use synonyms
I
study in Correct pronoun usage
apply
best
school and using the modern testing location these days parents should pay Add an article
the best
high
Add an article
a high
the high
cost
for their Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Use synonyms
children
destination Change noun form
children's
one
if they cannot afford to pay, certainly the Correct pronoun usage
apply
children
cannot use of best education amenities. Use synonyms
This
event will have Linking Words
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an affect
affect
on Replace the word
effect
children
's Use synonyms
feel
. Replace the word
feelings
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, how Linking Words
surprise
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surprised
are
rising day by day so Change the verb form
is
people
have to Use synonyms
work
harder until they can buy or rent Use synonyms
good
house. Add an article
a good
the good
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, there are different Linking Words
opinion
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opinions
people
need to Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
hardwe
.
Correct your spelling
hard we
Family
Add an article
The family
A family
person
will become hard Fix the agreement mistake
people
to
each other if they Change preposition
on
work
harder, they specifically don't have energy and time for their family. While they usually need to spend Use synonyms
long
time together to receive Change the article
a long
positive
Correct article usage
a positive
feel
. Prince dance Replace the word
feeling
then
fathers are always tired and busy, they cannot make phone and fresh condition for their Linking Words
children
and wife. Use synonyms
Linking Words
However
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,However
it
can arise long stands between fathers and their Correct pronoun usage
apply
family
.
In Fix the agreement mistake
families
conclusion
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,conclusion
people
cancel their life Use synonyms
problems
Use synonyms
with
working harder Change preposition
by
such
as housing Linking Words
problems
and paying Use synonyms
school
registration. Working hard can create Change preposition
for school
big
distance between family members which are really bad effect on life quality and Correct article usage
a big
children
's growth.Use synonyms
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