Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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It is argued that to protect local
businesses
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there should be some restrictions with the goal to avoid
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foreign companies can open offices and factories.
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phenomenon and it will explain why I disagree with
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opinion. It is true that in
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globalization era, the richest and biggest firms are obstacolating the trade of the local
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. To exemplify, in my hometown tourists prefer to purchase items from famous shops rather than from local shops.
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happens because big firms pay more attention to advertising better their
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and, as a consequence, people choose to buy famous items.
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, despite the higher number of items sold, it does not mean that
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the quality is higher. Actually, local
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higher quality due to the narrow production.
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, I believe that it could be not fear to enforce restrictions on foreign companies but it could be better to improve the advertisement of local's
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trying to improve the local trade. Actually, many times local
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are not known by tourists and
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is the reason why they, in the end,
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do shopping through the big firms. To sum up, I disagree with the opinion that regards the introduction of some restrictions in order to protect local business.
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, I am convinced that the best way to improve local trade is to promote better local
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