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percentage of people in the USA who often ate fast food at the restaurant between 2003 and 2013

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The chart illustrated the numbers of the percentage of
people
 in the USA who often ate fast
food
 at the restaurant between 2003 and 2013. The charts provide us
a
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common data, which is the
people
 of the USA who eat in the restaurant bear almost the same comparison between 2003 and 2013. If we look at the all graphs of 2003,
then
 we noticed at least 4% of the US
people
 eat every day at restaurants.
On the other hand
, 5% of
people
 don't eat fast
food
 any day. 17% eat several
times
 a
week
, 31% eat at least once a
week
, 30%
people
 once or twice a
week
, and
finally
 13%
people
 enjoy it a few
times
 a year. Without something different, we have noticed almost the same data
also
 between 2006 and 2013. It shows that 3%
percent
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 of the US
people
 eat fast
food
 at restaurants every day, and 4% never eat anytime. Between 2006 and 2013
also
 15% of
people
 eat a few
times
 a year. In 2006, 20% of
people
 often ate in a
week
, 33% once a
week
, and 25% eat once or twice a month while in 2013 that number is 33%. 28% of
people
 eat once a
week
, and 16% of the USA
people
 eat fast
food
 at the restaurant several
times
 a
week
.
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