Governments and big companies should work together to reverse environmental damage, rather than expecting individuals to take responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most
people
do not pay much attention about
environmental Change preposition
to
issues
. It is completely true that people
should take this
problem more seriously in order to prevent disasters in the future. However
, they do not take this
threat seriously enough.
One of the reasons why most people
do not care
about environmental issues
is because they do not affect humans directly in daily life. Simply because people
can not see where or when global warming nor pollution occur
. Correct subject-verb agreement
occurs
In other words
, environmental issues
affect people
indirectly day by day indirectly through the air, water
( which humans can not see using normal eyes). Correct word choice
and water
For example
, the majority of people
will care
about developing infrastructure which improves the effectiveness of working rather than having concerns about global warming or pollution. So, although
some people
Add a missing verb
are concern
concern
about environmental Wrong verb form
concerned
issues
, their motivation just wanes out over time, and these problems keep happening.
Second
reason is the insufficient Add an article
The second
of
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apply
government
in taking care
of environment
. At some points, Add an article
the environment
government
did give some solutions but they did not affect well in Add an article
the government
impoving
Correct your spelling
improving
environmently
. Correct your spelling
environmentally
In addition
that
Correct determiner usage
the
government
did not convey to citizen
about protecting Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
environment
(education) through Add an article
the environment
media
or school
popularly so Fix the agreement mistake
schools
people
are not inclined to care
enough about environmental issues
. For instance
, if a certain topic, no matter how superficial, is presented massively in the media
, people
will read, talk and care
about and
vice versa, if the Correct pronoun usage
it and
government
and media
neglect handling a certain issue, people
might not have the chance to know about the matter. Consequently
, this
makes people
unknowing of the seriousness of these troubles.
In conclusion, most people
do not pay much attention about
environmental Change preposition
to
issues
because people
only prioritize their daily life obstacles and the lack
Change the verb form
lacking
role
of Change preposition
of role
government
and media
in protecting environment
Add an article
the environment
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