Write a letter to your professor outlining why you are not satisfied with their course. In your letter: – write the reasons why you are not satisfied with the course – request to change your course – indicate what course you want to take instead
Dear Smith,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter to draw your attention to your criminal psychology course at Queensland University.
I am an undergraduate student of psychology and I happen to take your course as required by the department. However
, I find some contents that were taught in the class are outdated, such
as the impacts of online fraudulent
. Recent scientific evidence from Standford University Replace the word
fraud
reveal
that online fraudulent not only Change the verb form
reveals
causes
huge financial loss to its victimsChange the verb form
cause
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
worsens their mental health.
May you add this
information to the teaching materials? You may also
want to conduct a holistic review of the course contents and make sure they are updated.Submitted by jiachenguq on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,