Write a letter to your professor outlining why you are not satisfied with their course. In your letter: – write the reasons why you are not satisfied with the course – request to change your course – indicate what course you want to take instead

Dear Smith, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to your criminal psychology course at Queensland University. I am an undergraduate student of psychology and I happen to take your course as required by the department.
However
, I find some contents that were taught in the class are outdated,
such
as the impacts of online
fraudulent
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. Recent scientific evidence from Standford University
reveal
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reveals
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that online fraudulent not only
causes
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cause
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huge financial loss to its victims
,
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but
also
worsens their mental health. May you add
this
information to the teaching materials? You may
also
want to conduct a holistic review of the course contents and make sure they are updated.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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