You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: • describe the problem with the equipment • explain what happened when you phoned the shop • say what you would like the manager to do

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Dear ABC Shop Manager, I am writing
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letter to express my dissatisfaction with my shopping experience which I did at the Vancouver central park store on the 10th of January. I have bought a brand new blender from your store but when I unpacked it at my home I was really not happy with the way it does work
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I have noticed a few dents on the product and I feel like holding a used one. Right after
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situation, I had given a call to the store as I was not happy with the product damage and functionality but despite multiple phone calls none of them answered
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today morning one of the executives attempted my call with very rude behaviour along with cross-talking to my request which is not at acceptable. As you hear my bad experience and concern and I want you to take the necessary actions to make my
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visit happy.
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as providing some quality training along with some quick audits on how they are talking and approaching customers . I look forward to hearing your response to my complaint and I hope It will help me to have the best experience. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.
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