According to global health experts teenage pregnancy is on the ascendency among huge number of families across Africa. What are the causes of the problem? What can be done to solve the problem?
In recent times, there has been
a
widespread concern about unwanted Remove the article
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pregnancy
. Early Use synonyms
pregnancy
is ever increasing in Use synonyms
Africa
homes according to Global health experts. Replace the word
African
This
essay will discuss the reasons why Linking Words
adolescent
childbearing is on the high side which are parental neglect and Use synonyms
peer
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group
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influence
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This
essay will Linking Words
also
suggest possible solutions to rectify Linking Words
this
issue.
Perhaps the main problem stemming from Linking Words
adolescent
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pregnancy
is parental neglect. Use synonyms
This
implies that Linking Words
lack
of parental care and affection could lead teenage Use synonyms
girls
into early sexual relationships and in turn Use synonyms
getting
pregnant at an early age. Wrong verb form
get
Furthermore
, Linking Words
peer
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group
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influence
has a great effect on young Use synonyms
girls
as the Use synonyms
adolescent
stage marks the beginning of puberty and a stage in which they attain some level of independence . Young Use synonyms
girls
are easily moved by the advice they get from their peers in Use synonyms
school
and Use synonyms
also
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lack
of contention makes them crave Use synonyms
for
things Change preposition
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in
which their Change preposition
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parents
can not afford and Use synonyms
therefore
lead them into Linking Words
wrong
hands of men who impregnate them at a very tender age.
To illustrate, WHO reported that about 82 Correct article usage
the wrong
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
adolescent
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girls
had unwanted Use synonyms
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pregnancy
in the year 2020 Fix the agreement mistake
pregnancies
which
about 20 Correct word choice
and
percent
lead to maternal mortality Change the spelling
per cent
and
the reason behind Correct word choice
apply
this
delinquency is Linking Words
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lack
of proper sex Correct article usage
a lack
education
by Use synonyms
parents
and Use synonyms
also
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peer
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group
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influence
.
Turning to possible solutions , probably the most effective measure is that guidance and Use synonyms
counseling
should be included in Change the spelling
counselling
school
curriculums where Use synonyms
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the youngster
youngster
can get adequate Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
education
on how to go about sexual relationships and Use synonyms
also
educate guardians on how to inculcate the spirit of Linking Words
self discipline
and contentment in their children. Add a hyphen
self-discipline
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parents
should Use synonyms
also
create time for their children to leave room for adequate bonding and Linking Words
also
show them love and affection to avoid them turning to some of their peers Linking Words
on
sexual advice.
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for
For example
, it was reported in a research conducted by a medical student of Linking Words
University
of Lagos that teenage Correct article usage
the University
girls
who get proper sex Use synonyms
education
from Use synonyms
parents
and in Use synonyms
school
, get to pass with good grades in Use synonyms
school
and Use synonyms
also
do not involve in Linking Words
adolescent
childbearing.
In conclusion,teenage Use synonyms
pregnancy
is a debilitating act in Africa . Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
lack
of parental care and Use synonyms
peer
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group
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influence
causes teenage Use synonyms
girls
to get unwanted Use synonyms
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pregnancy
and proper sex Fix the agreement mistake
pregnancies
education
, guidance and Use synonyms
counseling
and parental guidance can curb the Change the spelling
counselling
menance
.Correct your spelling
menace
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