Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force such as the army while others think women are not suitable for this kind of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today
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number of female folks are voluntarily seeking employment opportunities
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the police and armed forces, while most people argue that
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is not ideal, a good number
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that
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women
ought to take up similar positions in the force as their male colleagues. Nowadays
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are going into extension as roles and
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longer taken based on an individual's sex and I
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this
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Women
just like men are supposed to be allowed to choose any job of their choice whether police or army without any form of prejudice once they possess the required skill.
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the applicant is male or female.
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athletic female would do better in the military than an
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man. Another reason why
this
category of people should be allowed to choose their career in the military is that
women
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would do better in with juvenile criminals. The uniformed jobs require more than just physical strength to be carried out.
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it is often believed that
women
should not undertake these duties as they are naturally procreative
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carry
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the fetus in their womb for nine months and
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can be a setback in their career. They are not supposed to do rigorous activities as it can induce premature birth.
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,
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expected by
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society to stay at home to nurture and raise the children after birth and the police jobs may not allow them
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this
primary call effectively
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the children may not be taken care of effectively. In conclusion, while people's
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may vary, I think that
women
should work shoulder-to-shoulder with their male counterparts

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equality
  • capability
  • inherent
  • high-stress situations
  • diverse perspectives
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • traditional views
  • gender roles
  • inclusive opportunities
  • role models
  • tactical advantages
  • intelligence gathering
  • negotiators
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