The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two images above explain the development of a university campus from 2010 until the current year. As it is observed, the university area transformed significantly to accommodate more students who enrolled over the period. In 2010, the arts and science education areas were in the same location, but they developed into two separate buildings in the present year.
Consequently
, the science building takes over the university office location.
On the other hand
, the old arts and science teaching blocks have been revitalized into focusing on art subjects. Meanwhile, the scholar accommodations have been expanded and increased into three areas. The old building near the north street has not changed but
next
to
them
Add a comma
,them
show examples
there is a new addition
of
Change preposition
to
show examples
student
Correct article usage
the student
show examples
house. The
last
student accommodation
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
this
year exists after demolishing the restaurant and the shops. Another area that has been removed is the lawn and seating space around the lake. The
next
change that occurred is the new road to a student accommodation building on the south campus. The lake,
however
, still stands in the middle of the campus.
Submitted by damaspandya on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "next".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • campus
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • sustainable
  • accessibility
  • layout
  • pedestrian zones
  • transportation routes
  • parking facilities
  • greenery
  • sports center
  • lecture halls
  • demolition
  • modernize
  • expansion
  • enhancement
  • comprehensive development
What to do next:
Look at other essays: