THE INCREASE in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. what is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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above. On the one hand, the reason why the increase in the production of consumer goods
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of all, the rapid increase of production and consumption to meet the urgent needs of
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technological equipment. Belong with the development of society,
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need to adapt and cultivate more knowledge, which only modern devices can meet.
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, be aware of the negative effects of increased production of goods on the environment. Because when the bad effects of the above problem are clearly recognized, the abutment environment can be protected. In
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, the state needs to have other severe penalties for violations. Life needs law and law is very important.
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, when a person violates and is punished, they will not dare to do it again. In conclusion, there are many causes as well as solutions to the problem mentioned above.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • consumer goods
  • natural environment
  • damage
  • causes
  • overconsumption
  • demand
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • natural resources
  • industrial pollution
  • waste
  • inadequate
  • waste management practices
  • public awareness
  • education
  • sustainable alternatives
  • stricter environmental laws
  • recycling
  • responsible consumption
  • clean technologies
  • renewable energy
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