In many developed countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water quality from both Industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.

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It is (an) undeniable fact that

air

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and water are been polluted

from

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industrial activities mainly in

undeveloping

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undeveloped

nations. Relocating those sectors to (the) rural areas and using robotics

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(are) the principal ways of curtailing

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menance

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menace

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essay

wil

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will

expatiate

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, building industries in rural remote areas is one the principal means of preventing

pollution

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. To elucidate, transferring

companies

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in(to) areas where there is less population and planted trees will go

along

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way to

improve

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circulation

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the circulation

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of carbon-monodioxide(is

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not toxic

air

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?why should there be an improvement in its circulation) generated from those sectors without having any ill-effect to residents.

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, manufacturing and application of Robotics machine(s) that make

used

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of electricity will play a major role to prevent

pollution

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rather

using

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machines that

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patrols

petrols

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petrol

kinds of petrol

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which

generates

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generate

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fumes

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influencing the quality of

air

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and water consumed by the populace in the society(rephrase).

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, DailySun newspaper reckoned

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that 80

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% of mortality in Nigeria is mainly caused

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by inhalation

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of fumes from the production

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and reduced to 10% since applications of artificial equipment.

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, using robotic machines that

uses

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no petroleum will help to prevent

pollution

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, education on proper disposal is another method of preventing

pollution

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means that workers should be propey❓ enlightened on how to

managed

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their waste without constituting

nuisance

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a nuisance

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health

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the health

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of individuals,

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as avoiding dumping of refuse

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the rivers and where natural inhabitants

resides

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like sea foods as well

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apply

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polluting their drinking water❓.

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, if all the

wastes

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waste

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products generated

from

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companies

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are dumped indiscriminately it will affect both man and animals. To illustrate, research conducted by Williams Nelson❓❓ stated that 70%

epidemic

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of epidemic

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disease(s) in most developing countries can be attributed to oil spillage.

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disposing

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industrial appropriately can help to prevent

negative

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impact of

pollution

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. In conclusion, relocation of industries and construction

companies

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to rural

aresa

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areas

area

where there is less populace and making use of

non fossils

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machines will go

along

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a long

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way to prevent

air

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and water

pollution

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in developing nations thereby improving health.(your conclusion is not well developed,you didn't include the proper waste disposal that you wrote about in your

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paragraph)

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

pollution control regulations
emissions
discharges
green technology incentives
environmentally friendly practices
renewable energy sources
sustainable materials
waste management policies
recycling processes
environmental monitoring
compliance with environmental standards
public awareness campaigns
environmental protection
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modern building techniques
international environmental organizations
air and water quality management

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In many developed countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water quality from both Industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Some people think that it is better to take part in team sports, while others believe that individual sports are better. Discuss both these views and Give your opinion.

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in school to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

General task 1 Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.