In many developed countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water quality from both Industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.

It is (an) undeniable fact that
air
and water are been polluted
from
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industrial activities mainly in
undeveloping
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undeveloped
nations. Relocating those sectors to (the) rural areas and using robotics
is
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(are) the principal ways of curtailing
this
menance
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menace
.
This
essay
wil
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will
expatiate
further
.
To begin
, building industries in rural remote areas is one the principal means of preventing
pollution
. To elucidate, transferring
companies
in(to) areas where there is less population and planted trees will go
along
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way to
improve
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circulation
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the circulation
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of carbon-monodioxide(is
this
not toxic
air
?why should there be an improvement in its circulation) generated from those sectors without having any ill-effect to residents.
Also
, manufacturing and application of Robotics machine(s) that make
used
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of electricity will play a major role to prevent
pollution
rather
using
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than using
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machines that
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patrols
petrols
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petrol
kinds of petrol
cans of petrol
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which
generates
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generate
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fumes
thus
influencing the quality of
air
and water consumed by the populace in the society(rephrase).
For instance
, DailySun newspaper reckoned
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% of mortality in Nigeria is mainly caused
inhalation
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by inhalation
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of fumes from the production
companies
and reduced to 10% since applications of artificial equipment.
Therefore
, using robotic machines that
uses
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no petroleum will help to prevent
pollution
.
Furthermore
, education on proper disposal is another method of preventing
pollution
.
This
means that workers should be propey❓ enlightened on how to
managed
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their waste without constituting
nuisance
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a nuisance
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to
health
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the health
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of individuals,
such
as avoiding dumping of refuse
to
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the rivers and where natural inhabitants
resides
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reside
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like sea foods as well
as
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apply
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polluting their drinking water❓.
In other words
, if all the
wastes
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waste
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products generated
from
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companies
are dumped indiscriminately it will affect both man and animals. To illustrate, research conducted by Williams Nelson❓❓ stated that 70%
epidemic
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disease(s) in most developing countries can be attributed to oil spillage.
Therefore
,
disposing
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industrial appropriately can help to prevent
negative
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the negative
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impact of
pollution
. In conclusion, relocation of industries and construction
companies
to rural
aresa
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areas
area
where there is less populace and making use of
non fossils
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machines will go
along
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a long
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way to prevent
air
and water
pollution
in developing nations thereby improving health.(your conclusion is not well developed,you didn't include the proper waste disposal that you wrote about in your
last
paragraph)

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  • Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution control regulations
  • emissions
  • discharges
  • green technology incentives
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable materials
  • waste management policies
  • recycling processes
  • environmental monitoring
  • compliance with environmental standards
  • public awareness campaigns
  • environmental protection
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • modern building techniques
  • international environmental organizations
  • air and water quality management
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