In many developed countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water quality from both Industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.

It is (an) undeniable fact that

air

and water are been polluted

from

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industrial activities mainly in

undeveloping

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undeveloped

nations. Relocating those sectors to (the) rural areas and using robotics

is

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(are) the principal ways of curtailing

this

menance

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menace

.

This

essay

wil

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will

expatiate

further

.

To begin

, building industries in rural remote areas is one the principal means of preventing

pollution

. To elucidate, transferring

companies

in(to) areas where there is less population and planted trees will go

along

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way to

improve

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circulation

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the circulation

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of carbon-monodioxide(is

this

not toxic

air

?why should there be an improvement in its circulation) generated from those sectors without having any ill-effect to residents.

Also

, manufacturing and application of Robotics machine(s) that make

used

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of electricity will play a major role to prevent

pollution

rather

using

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machines that

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patrols

petrols

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petrol

kinds of petrol

cans of petrol

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which

generates

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generate

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fumes

thus

influencing the quality of

air

and water consumed by the populace in the society(rephrase).

For instance

, DailySun newspaper reckoned

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% of mortality in Nigeria is mainly caused

inhalation

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by inhalation

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of fumes from the production

companies

and reduced to 10% since applications of artificial equipment.

Therefore

, using robotic machines that

uses

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no petroleum will help to prevent

pollution

.

Furthermore

, education on proper disposal is another method of preventing

pollution

.

This

means that workers should be propey❓ enlightened on how to

managed

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their waste without constituting

nuisance

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to

health

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the health

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of individuals,

such

as avoiding dumping of refuse

to

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the rivers and where natural inhabitants

resides

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like sea foods as well

as

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apply

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polluting their drinking water❓.

In other words

, if all the

wastes

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waste

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products generated

from

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companies

are dumped indiscriminately it will affect both man and animals. To illustrate, research conducted by Williams Nelson❓❓ stated that 70%

epidemic

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disease(s) in most developing countries can be attributed to oil spillage.

Therefore

,

disposing

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industrial appropriately can help to prevent

negative

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impact of

pollution

. In conclusion, relocation of industries and construction

companies

to rural

aresa

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areas

area

where there is less populace and making use of

non fossils

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machines will go

along

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a long

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way to prevent

air

and water

pollution

in developing nations thereby improving health.(your conclusion is not well developed,you didn't include the proper waste disposal that you wrote about in your

last

paragraph)