Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes. Should these new houses be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside?

Nowadays,countries facing

a high population problems

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and

increase

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house

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housing

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facilities .In

this

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essay I will discuss the main problem of

increasing

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the increasing

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population to find

location

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a location

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in both the cities and villages,

i

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believe that government should

built

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build

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houses

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in

countryside

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the countryside

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area

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On the one hand,there are many reasons why authorities should not be constructed new

appartment

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apartment

in cities

area

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.

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,in urban

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areas

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people

are

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live in the

suffocatrd

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suffocated

places .

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,there

are

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a lot of

appartment

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apartment

in the developing

area

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and no land left in that places to

built

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some new

house

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for

new

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generation .

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, pollution

are

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also

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increasing in cities

area

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which

affect

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on

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the

people

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health

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,I personally think that remote

areas

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are the best place to make new

houses

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reason is that a lot of space

are

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available in that

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and all grocery items are available in

the villages

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the area of the village

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area

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. Another reason is that

,

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it

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helpfull

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helpful

for countryside

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if

government

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the government

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built new

houses

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in those places

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, they

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make a lot of

another

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stuff

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as

,

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hospitals , roads and

another main things

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another main thing

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To conclude,

i

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would like to reiterate that

find

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the location of

houses

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for

increasing

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the increasing

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population is the main problem of many countries ,

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believe that both the efforts of government and individuals

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problem can be tacked.