Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes. Should these new houses be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside?
Nowadays,countries facing
a high population problems
and Correct the article-noun agreement
high population problems
a high population problem
increase
Wrong verb form
increasing
house
facilities .In Replace the word
housing
this
essay I will discuss the main problem of increasing
population to find Add an article
the increasing
location
in both the cities and villages,Add an article
a location
the location
i
believe that government should Change the capitalization
I
built
Change the verb form
build
be built
houses
in countryside
Add an article
the countryside
a countryside
area
On the one hand,there are many reasons why authorities should not be constructed new appartment
in cities Correct your spelling
apartment
area
.Firstly
,in urban areas
people Add a comma
,areas
are
live in the Unnecessary verb
apply
suffocatrd
places .Correct your spelling
suffocated
In other words
,there are
a lot of Change the verb form
is
appartment
in the developing Correct your spelling
apartment
area
and no land left in that places to built
some new Wrong verb form
build
house
for Fix the agreement mistake
houses
new
generation . Add an article
a new
the new
Secondly
, pollution are
Change the verb form
is
also
increasing in cities area
which affect
Change the verb form
affects
on
the Change preposition
apply
people
health
Change noun form
people's
On the other hand
,I personally think that remote areas
are the best place to make new houses
.The first
reason is that a lot of space are
available in that Change the verb form
is
areas
and all grocery items are available in the villages
Change to a genitive case
the area of the village
the area of the villages
area
. Another reason is that,
it Remove the comma
apply
also
helpfull
for countryside Correct your spelling
helpful
areas
if government
built new Add an article
the government
houses
in those places then
, they also
make a lot of another
stuff Correct quantifier usage
other
such
as,
hospitals , roads and Remove the comma
apply
another main things
To conclude,Replace the adjective
another main thing
other main things
i
would like to reiterate that Change the capitalization
I
find
the location of Wrong verb form
finding
houses
for increasing
population is the main problem of many countries ,Add an article
the increasing
an increasing
i
believe that both the efforts of government and individuals Change the capitalization
I
this
problem can be tacked.Submitted by kawankaur on
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