In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In many nations, denying
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application
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because of their age is considered illegal. In my opinion, I think
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the
unsuitablity
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unsuitability
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of all individuals toward certain occupations. A good reason not to accept universal
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of all ages is that particular occupations may not suitable for everyone.
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career should laser
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candidates who
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stamina and are active in
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young age
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whereas
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such
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requires the ones with a lot of experience. Screening out a
job
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odd
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of hiring the correct candidate without spending too much time on the unsuitable counterpart. Another point to consider is that having no layer to reject
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job
's request may obstruct the company's recruitment process and human resource development. Being able to apply for any company with ease, applicants are interviewed multiple times, sometimes, they are feeling dispirited and cancelling those are not attractive to them.
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rescheduled
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interviews or
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the opportunity for the company to recruit
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appropriate
persons and training. In conclusion, illegalizing the candidate screening process is not feasible for most countries but refining interviewees' abilities and skills
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greater
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chance for those individuals to strike a
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age discrimination
  • inclusive workplace
  • workplace diversity
  • workforce experience
  • equality in hiring
  • age-related stereotypes
  • demographic changes
  • economic growth
  • social security systems
  • consumer spending
  • non-discriminatory policies
  • bias
  • fair practices
  • retirement age
  • intergenerational collaboration
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