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Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children, whereas others say that it has positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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There have been debates about whether playing
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games
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 is beneficial for
children
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. Some people, especially parents, are particularly against that; whereas some others from the public say sitting before a
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 can be advantageous and should not be demonized. To a lot of people, their
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games
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 is that
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 it necessarily reduces the time
children
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 spend on their studies. More often than not,
children
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 and adolescents do not have strong self-discipline and tend to indulge in
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.
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, their time and effort spent in studies would be to a certain extent deprived
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their academic results would be compromised, and they may not build a foundation strong enough for their future careers. Some of them even develop a sedentary lifestyle which is not good for their health.
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, advocates of
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 participating in
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games
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 can develop gamers' hand-eye coordination, logical thinking, and problem-solving skills. Very often, gamers are presented with a difficult situation, and they need to analyze the enemy's weak points, evaluate different options on hand and come up with a consolidated plan to proceed to the
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 stage. In conclusion, it is believed that playing
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games
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 may turn
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 into indulgent gamers and away from homework and studies.
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, it may
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 help to develop
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's problem-solving skills. As far as I am concerned, the hazards of indulging in
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 are much bigger than their potential benefits.
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, limiting
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's playing time on
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games
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 is commendable in order to secure a better balance.
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