Nowadays because f growing
technology
working from
home
has become more common among workers.
However
, some individuals think
this
development is really helpful for employees and their families. While
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others think they bring
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stress
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their
home
. I am going to interpret both of these views and in the
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To start with,
this
development in
technology
beneficially impacts all
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worldwide. To give an example, employees who have
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long distance from their
home
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now they can easily do their job Infront of their laptop. Not only
this
action helps
people
to
work
in their comfortable house but
also
, they help the environment as well by not using privet cars.
Furthermore
,
this
technology
gives an opportunity for applicants who are not native to the country, they can have projects from other countries without
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there.
In addition
,
people
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without missing their
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and children.
On the other hand
, others think
home
working has some disadvantages.
For instance
, some individuals think
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who
work
in their house
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can bring the
work
stress
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their house and
this
action directly impacts the relations between spouses.
Moreover
, new statistics illustrate that 80% of family problems
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.
Although
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we cannot underestimate the importance of
this
technology
,
people
should learn how to separate working life
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real life.
To sum up, in my
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this
technology
and development s very helpful for all
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. The point is that individuals should learn how to use it in good and beneficially ways.