As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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two or three decades, due to Globalization, plenty of companies started their businesses in each sector.

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,

organization

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is not only having an intention to make

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but

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each company must do sociable activities. I completely agree with

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statement because every person is having social responsibility towards their nation. To commence with, each person is having a fundamental right to earn

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for profits and to live in

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society.

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, the public is having the right to make

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, for the development of the country they must structure some sociable activities because of their responsibility towards the nation. In fact, social activities

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not only contributing

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they can do any favour. One clear example is that, due to industrialization and urbanization, people are facing

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pollution so organizations should sponsor plants to plant in big cities to control pollution

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it would be beneficial to the public. I believe that it is one of the great social responsibilities.

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, services should be provided for their employees to live happily.

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, businesses should sponsor free services to their workers

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as free health insurance, education for

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children, and transportation facilities.

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, employees could able to work happily without any stress for their

family

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families

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.

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, poor villages must be adopted and should provide work facilities to the public

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then

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companies

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would be developed. In conclusion, if a business organization coordinate with

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society

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every country would be in a top position.

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, natural disasters and poverty would

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through social actions.