You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Describe what the problem was Tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it Suggest your own solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a member of your esteemed club and have been regularly enjoying the swimming activity.

Although

last

weekend, I faced an issue and would like to express my dissatisfaction

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the same. I observed that the pool

water

is no longer

prinstine

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pristine

and has turned green.

This

concern could be due to the growth of algae in the pool area.

Additionally

, the whole experience of swimming was worst because it

stincks

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sticks

stinks

in the area where the depth of

water

level is lesser.

Moreover

, I had

severe

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rash all over my skin and felt itchy after diving inside.

On the other hand

, I notified the housekeeping team, and they promptly changed the unclean

water

with

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the fresh one.

However

, I believe the root cause of

this

problem is algae and it must be taken off before replenishing the pool with

hygenic

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hygienic

water

. Looking forward to your response. Regards, Devika

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