Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the problems of playing computer games and what can you suggest to minimize the bad effects?

In our modern world with

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of technology and the

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a large number of human beings spend a lot of time playing online games,including teenagers.In

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essay,I will explore the problems associated with addiction to phones and computers and suggest possible

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for them.

To begin

with,today there are many different programs in the public domain that are of great interest to the younger generation and they can spend 3-4 or more hours sitting in the game room.As soon as it happens,people’s

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begins to deteriorate.

In addition

,a person may have poor eyesight and memory.One

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to

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problem could be parental control.Without a doubt,adults should limit access to the harmful effects of gaming devices.

As a result

of

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,individuals will take it more seriously and realize that they shouldn’t get involved in it.

Secondly

,half of the young society stop learning and break away from

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due to

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of their friends,who play with them.

Consequently

,academic performance is noticeably reduced and there are problems with future admission.

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solution

to

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problem may be

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general

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on the part of the government and teachers.

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, for young students from an early

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there will be a good influence and they will understand what is best to pay

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attention to and what is worth resorting to in order to relax and spend free time with friends or alone. In conclusion,we can see several problems related to

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topic that we have in the 21st century.

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with which we can avoid trouble.