The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand , it is also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extend do you agree or disagree with these statements?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connected
  • isolation
  • instant messaging
  • video calls
  • social media
  • virtual communities
  • sense of belonging
  • superficial relationships
  • meaningful interactions
  • excessive use
  • in-person socialization
  • social networks
  • self-expression
  • fade away
  • introverted individuals
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