improvement in health, education, science and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations however the Government or richer nations should take responsibility for helping the poor nations do you agree or disagree

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Over these
last
two or three decades, due to globalization, rich
countries
became richer and poor nations became poorer.
However
, for the growth in penry
countries
must
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education, science and health departments by the Government or rich
countries
. I opine
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statement and move
forwarded
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with my perception.
Firstly
,
Over population
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is one of the reasons for
the the
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poverty in any nation.
As a result
, it leads to crimes, scams, and thefts.
Hence
, to overcome
this situations
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, the Government should raise tremendous schools, hospitals, and businesses. One clear example is that, if
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free education is available to all
then
everybody would complete their studies and get a job will and will provide contribution through tax to the society
then
poor
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the poor
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country
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countries
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might grow.
Hence
,
improvement
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the improvement
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of organizations, industries, and hospitality
are
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essential
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part to get rid of poorness.
Secondly
, wealthy nations should help resources like food, science, and technologies to the
underprevilized
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underprivileged
states
.
For instance
, inter-exchange is the bridge between richer kingdoms and low
countries
so
that
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higher
states
should encourage
by
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buying resources
such
as goods, food, and groceries from them.
Therefore
, deprived
states
might be grown through exchanging methods. In conclusion, I opine that poor
states
would be developed by advanced technologies like research,
instituitions
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institutions
, and
transportations
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transportation
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. To improve the growth in lower empires the Government or
well equipped
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kingdoms must help.
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  • Economic disparity
  • Humanitarian assistance
  • Infrastructure development
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Foreign aid
  • Global partnership
  • Post-colonial economic structures
  • Philanthropy
  • Prosperity
  • Capacity building
  • Sustainable development goals (SDGs)
  • Trade imbalances
  • Aid effectiveness
  • Global citizenship
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