It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is essential to pave the way for the

children

to differentiate between correct and incorrect behaviours from a young age. Some individuals think penalties should be put on youngsters when they do something wrong in order to get back on the right track. I

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agree with

this

statement to some extent as the way of guiding is

also

vital to make young ones have better manners and morality.

First

of all, having an intelligent mindset and of ability to distinguish things good or bad is a must-have skill for being a human throughout his/her lifetime.

Secondly

, youngsters need to know that every action in

this

world has its own repercussions or reactions. Whenever they do something bad,parents and tutors should explain why they should avoid those kinds of behaviours and make some retributions in order to inculcate unpleasant things that can return due to inappropriate manners. Through

this

kind of admonishing, youngsters will understand the risk of responsibility for the mistakes they have made.

Moreover

, the ways of parenting or kinds of punishments given to the

children

are

also

crucial.The elderly people should not beat or scold the young ones for the mistakes that are made intentionally.

This

manner could mark large scars in the mind of innocent

children

.

Instead

of punishing with torture ways, making them get some reflection time or

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the things they messed up are relevant ideas to make young ones realize their faults. In conclusion, setting proper penalties for the

children

making bad manners is suitable to some extent until it hurts their mental or physical health.

This

would make the world more positive and be full of people with

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