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Some people believe studying in a college or university is the best way to prepare for a successful career.Other people prefer to get a job as soon as they leave scool and to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Knowledge and experience are factors which can be useful to have a better future. Several people believe that having a university degree is necessary to be successful someday.
However
, few are dispute
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that notion
,
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 and think that getting a
job
 after school is much better to gain more experience. In line with the above statement, I agree that getting
diploma
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 after school is beneficial because they will get a lot of opportunities to get the
job
 that they want and good
remunaration
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remuneration
 than just getting an experience. To commence with, it is imperative nowadays to finish studying at the university so that you can have your
dream
job
. Let us say that a
child
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dream
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 to be a nurse and to chase that
dream
 is to finish a
four year
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 course. Apart from that, student needs to take
examination
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 to get a license and become
a
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professional nurse.
Additionally
, being professional is having a chance to get a higher
salary
.
For instance
, nurses are
indemand
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in-demand
in demand
 in every part of the world today.
Moreover
, they can have opportunities to migrate and to have
a
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stable
job
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.
For instance
, in the Philippines,
nurses
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salary
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 are not that high
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 to other countries like the U.K and USA.
Consequently
, they choose to migrate to
other country
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 to have a better
salary
 even though they will are miles away from their family. While, if a person did not finish school and just
work
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 after, they will have a limited option of work they can choose.
Besides
 that, they cannot achieve more
salary
 in the distant future because they do not have
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diploma
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 which some
of
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the company is one of the requirements. To sum up, it is pivotal that each individual should finish their study so that they will achieve their
dream
job
 and
well-paid
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 in the future. In that, they can easily achieve a better life.
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