It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Presently,
Tourism
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industry is booming at a very faster pace all over the world and it generates a lot of income. It is assumed that the unacceptable behaviour of visitors in tourist spots can be detrimental to the
tourism
industry. In the forthcoming paragraphs will discuss what are the reasons behind it and
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possible solution with my own knowledge. To commence with, the main
first
reason which
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people get cheated by the
travel
agent as they project
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picture of a particular place in the mind of tourists and they get pursued by it. As people do not find
such
facilities or lack of facilities
such
as accommodation,
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, meals, and many more. They get annoyed by paying
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amount
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to
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, they through out their frustration
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the tourist place, which ultimately
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the
tourism
sector To cope with
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, government authorities should take
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disciplinary action against those
travel
agencies
which are deteriorating the image of
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tourism
and the license of these deceivable
travel
agencies
should be barred.
Moreover
, travellers who are cheated by
such
fake
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should take the help of social media like
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Instagram
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by posting about deceptive
travel
agencies
.
As a result
, everyone could know what is wrong and right. To conclude,
tourism
is a vital economic sector of a nation as it generates tonnes of income. While, few people and
agencies
for the sake of minting money cheat the travellers, by taking proper action by government and tourist
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this
issue can be resolved.
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