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Summarise the information of how instant noodles are manufactured.

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Lately, Instant noodles
has
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 become
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well-liked
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well liked
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 snack choice. The following charts
represents
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 the entire process of getting it done,
moreover
 it reveals how
this
 product
appear
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 on supermarket shelves. The whole procedure
consist
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 of
series
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 of steps to make its way to grocery stores. To start the process the flour
get
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 shifted to storage soils and
next
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the next
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 stage is to mix
with
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it with
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 other ingredients. Following
this
, the substance is spread into sheets which
cut
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 into strips during the fourth stage. Afterwards bunch of noodles are formed into discs. Later on, the process involves cooking
of
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round-shaped figures
into
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in
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 oil and
get
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 dried. The seventh stage comprises
of
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placing the product into the cups and adding some spices and vegetables
in
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to
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 it.
Lastly
, products get wrapped into packaging and printed labels are glued onto the cups which are sealed later on. Overall, these instant noodles are not though instant in
manufacturing
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 course. Which demands several tidies steps and
considerably
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 long time for a product to get to a supermarket.
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