Over sugar consumption is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility of sugar intake. Discuss both the views and give your opinion?

It is commonly believed that excessive use of

sugar

is really harmful to our health and there are many arguments about who is responsible for preventing

over

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sugar

consumption. Many assume that

governments

ought to impose some regulations whereas others think that it's

individual's

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an individual's

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duty to solve

this

problem.

This

essay will discuss both

the

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views.

To begin

with the

first

perception,

Governments

are apparently able to control the problem of consuming too much

carbohydrate

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. One way that I suggest is that they could restrict the amount of

sugar

in the products sold in the supermarket by a whole of policies.

For instance

, they should take some strict rules related to the maximum amount of

sugar

in a particular sweet product into effect, or they could make

business

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businesses

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highlight the proportion of

sugar

on the packing so that the consumers could be aware of whether the goods they want to purchase is too sweet or not. Another effective way that the leaders could activate is

increasing

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the number of lessons relating to

sugar

as well as its damage to

human's

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health. Actually,

this

kind of lesson is currently

teaching

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at secondary school and high school in subjects like chemistry or biology.

However

,

this

isn't enough for raising awareness of kids as they had better teach these kids when they are still

at

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elementary schools. Those lessons should be illustrated by pictures, photos that could raise the interest of the pupils. Once

this

is done, I believe that the problem will reduce really remarkably.

On the other hand

, though

governments

can do

such

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a lot of things to overcome the difficulty, their policies only promote efficiency if the residents are conscious of dealing with the issue. There are many things that each citizen could do to control

the

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sugar

exploitation.

For example

: Activities like eating more vegetables,

drinking

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and drinking

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more mineral water could diminish the desire of using

sugar

.

Besides

, according to some recent research, over 70% of dwellers exploit

carbohydrate

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while watching TV as well as they are unaware of how much

sugar

they had taken in, so it

also

means that if people take some outdoor activities in their free time

instead

of sedentary ones, they will easily lessen the consumption of sweet food. To summarise, residents play the main role of protecting their health by

stop

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exploiting too much

sugar

. To encourage them, the

governments

could

also

activate some effective policies.