[3:51 PM, 10/20/2019] mooh: difficult to meet up with the minimum attendan… [3:51 PM, 10/20/2019] mooh: You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses

Mr Mark, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am not able to do my evening
course
anymore. Primary, I introduce myself, my name is Kate Rupert, I am enrolled in the economics
course
in the evening group. Actually, I am a full-time worker at a corporation company,
besides
,that I took a part-time time
course
from you. But now I find that there is a conflict between my work schedule and class timing, which is not only affecting my attendance,
also
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I am falling behind in my studies.
Thus
I am an immigrant, I need to work full-time time there to get my permanent residency in Canada.
However
, I
also
need good scores in my
course
so that I have good opportunities in future,
this
can only happen if I do my studies with full concentration. For now, I am deciding to continue my job as I am only left with three more months' experience. After that, I will be able to reduce my work hours and continue
this
course
as full-time time. Hopefully, you understand my situation. Hoping to hear from your side soon. sincerely Yours Kate
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