In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities. Others believe money should be spent on improving existing public. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

For many people around the world, the preferred mode of transportation is a high-speed rail. Commuters travelling to and from

work

rely on

the

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safety and efficiency,

which

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tourists appreciate the convenience and novelty that

train

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trains

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provide

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. Others believe that highways, busses and regular trains should be improved before new

high speed

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high-speed

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lines are added. Safety is chief among concerns for those who travel to

work

or school on a regular basis. If one drives a car, they have to concentrate on roads not only to avoid accidents but

also

to prevent other drivers from causing a problem on the road. High speed-rail allows the communter to leave the driving to the professional controlling the train, allowing them to get some

work

done while getting to

work

safely.

In addition

, people tend to move

further

and

further

away from city

centers

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, where land and houses are more affordable.

High-speed

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rail allows these commuters to travel

greater

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distance

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in a shorter amount of time. There is a flow-on effect here

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because if we can reduce the number of cars on the road, we can

also

cut down on traffic jams and road delays.

On the other hand

,

high speed

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trains are expensive, and some believe

this

money could

be spend

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on

reparing

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repairing

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motorways which are used by cars, buses and motorcycles. Another

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possibility

possiblity

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possibility

would be to use

this

money to build more regular

communter

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commuter

trains and buses to service the

ever expanding

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populations.

Moreover

, boats and ferries could benefit from a budget which focuses more on

existing

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form

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of transport. In the end, public transport is

a

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issue which affects us all. The taxes which we pay should

be spend

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on the type of transport which will have the most benefit

of

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all citizens.

In addition

, we need to take into account how much the environment is damaged by fossil, fuels and

pollutions

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.

Therefore

, I believe in order to move forward, we need to embrace the idea of

high-speed

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the high-speed

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rail so that future

generation

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can continue to live safely and efficiently.