You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter - express your interest - ask for details of the work that needs to be done - let them know when you are available.

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am interested to
work
with your organization.
Firstly
, I would like to express my interest in your
work
. As I am a teacher, I love to
work
with children.
Moreover
, I am able to teach them new things which are needed.
Secondly
, I would be thankful if you give me details of the
work
. Can you tell me how many days of the week and how much time I could
work
with you?
Lastly
, I would like to inform you that I am available at weekends from 8.30 AM to 4.30 PM. I am not able to be a part of your organization
as
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a full-time.
This
is all I would like to share with you. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Akshay Kumar
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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