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Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace.with today's technology this process is happening at a greater rate.Technology is increasinly responsible for unemployment. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

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Technology has reduced the requirement for manpower Since the 18th Century and with the increase in technological advancement
this
 changeover is occurring at a faster pace.Some people sight
this
 advancement as a reason for the rise in unemployment. I agree with
this
 statement because many
work
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 that previously required human presence for
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its
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 functioning
are
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 now handled easily by machines. Machines and
Artifical
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Artificial
 intelligence complete most tasks with more accuracy than humans and take less time to do so too. As far
as
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an employer is
considered
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 employing a human for a job that can be done by a
machine
 or
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artificial
artifical
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artificial
 intelligence is more profitable in monetary terms. Apart from the initial acquiring costs of a
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 it does not require
to
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be
payed
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 monthly wages, funds or pensions. Adding a cherry on top is the fact that a single
machine
 or software can perform a task that would
otherwise
 require a team of people. Operating
such
 a
machine
 would hardly require one or two people sometimes even none at all.
This
 reduces the employing tendencies of company owners. A good example is
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how many restaurants have automated systems for placing orders and serving making waitresses an obsolete profession.
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