The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In our age Historians used the paintings to analyse the
culture
and lifestyle during ancient times, it won't be surprising if our generation will be evaluated by the cinema that we make in centuries to come. The idea of cinema as an important art form is to create a strong lasting memory in the audience about a particular topic and to make them think about that topic through the vision of a filmmaker.I do agree with the view that a good chunk of American film-producing companies promotes patriotism and the political interests of the American
Government
through their films.It's too obvious in many superhero movies and military operation movies that the audience regardless of race, region or
culture
will feel and enjoy those moments of patriotism. I feel some of these are effects of the deliberate effort by the
government
working
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closely with film
production
companies for decades. I believe
this
has helped the American govt to attract the young population to serve their armed forces. No
government
that wishes to preserve, preach and convey
their
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culture
shall not shy back from learning from the example of Hollywood and America. Each Govt should encourage
their
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own regional movie
production
from acting,
production
, values, distribution and business.
Government
should
make
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the initiative to ensure good quality movies are being produced which are appropriate for the age groups and viewers. They must invest in institutions to brew out the best
of
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actors, makers and other technicians who are competitive with the time and technology throughout the globe.The artists and technicians should be recognized timely for their great pieces of art and thereby encouraging the ideas and
culture
of a society.Ease of doing business for these movie productions by reducing taxation , better distribution and subtle political promotion can
also
be done.
Government
taking positive stands to support their film
production
houses and artists to promote , preserve and propagate their
culture
and values, sustains longer .
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  • Americanisation
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Local cinema
  • Cultural diversity
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Film subsidies
  • National identity
  • Artistic expression
  • Blockbusters
  • Cultural preservation
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