You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mrs John, I am writing to inform you that I have received an exam timetable from the University today for my ongoing course. I would like you to sanction leave for 15 days to focus on study and complete the same with a good score. As I know that during the month of December, several staff members will go on leave to celebrate Christmas with their families. I will stay in the office during that time and compensate for

this

time off and the pending backlog would be cleared.

Moreover

, I would work for at least 12 hours a day to justify the requirements of clients equally. The degree which I am going to be awarded is Business Management in Operation which has definitely enhanced my managerial skills. I will implement the knowledge which I gained during the course for

further

improvement of our company performance. I am looking forward to your as usual support. Yours sincerely, Smit Paul

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7 paragraphs

160 words

9.00

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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