Threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the dis advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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risky in our life,

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a

result

, it raises the

crimenals

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criminals

criminal

in

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worldwide. The question is,

threat

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the threat

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unclear

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of unclear

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weapons

maintans

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maintains

maintain

global peace. Unclear strength

provide

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cheap and clean

energies

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energy

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. The uses of unclear automation far outweigh the benefits. In

this

,

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I am going to discuss my

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opinion

opinions

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opinion

. In terms of problems, several

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countries are selling

the

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apply

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weapons

for

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to

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customers,

hence

, it makes the communities are risky they have to block these

weapons

,

as a

result

, it

rises

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the rate of criminals

such

as

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the United

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state

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there many stores

who

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that

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sell these

weapons

. The main reason given to support

this

claim is that without

weapons

it makes global peace and comfortable. To illustrate,

Plastania

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Platania

is the most criminal in

this

eara

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area

era

, they kill the societies one by one with

weapons

this

is worse

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to do in people especially poor people.

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other hand

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, as well as I know

this

an

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issue did not

have

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exist and

solove

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solve

for a long time.

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,

firstly

, if the

weapons

did not exist

it

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they

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might assist

over

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the world and keep the world more

peace

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peaceful

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.

For Instance

, the people make the world happy without

weapons

and

less

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fewer

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the

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criminal. To sum up,

although

between

this

situation, as I know the government should

bloock

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block

all stores in the

wolrd

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world

,

as a

result

, it assists less the criminals,

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, must

did

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not sell the

weapons

into the communities it makes rates of criminals less in the future.

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, I believe that I

hpoe

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hope

have

this

reason can exist in future,

as a

result

, it makes life easier.