You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -give details of your study plan -explain why you want a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear John, Hope you are doing great! As you may be aware, I am travelling to Toronto, Canada

this

month's end for my master's in computers.

This

is going to be 2 years of study program which includes an internship in the

last

semester. I have never been to Toronto, so looking forward to getting the details from you about the city As you know the educational expenses are sky high already, seems like the living cost is on the higher side too. Is that true? Could you please suggest a better place for accommodation?

Furthermore

, I would request you to please help to find a part-time job. During my studies, I am allowed to work around 20 hours a week.

Hence

any temporary work will help me to cover my living expenses. I am aware that you have a great friend circle there. So I would be so thankful if you can recommend me to your known ones. I have good knowledge and experience in computers. So any assistant level jobs will be more suitable.

However

, I am open to taking any job and I will do my best to succeed in that. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully. Thomas

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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