Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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and soft drinks, some believe that

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taxes should be introduced to change people's behaviours toward sugary products. Personally, I am inclined to disagree with

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that

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increases are not an effective measure against

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behaviour. One main reason people do not choose healthy

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is not the

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but the availability of healthy

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. Compared to the ubiquitous fast-

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chains, most urban cities only have a limited number of vegetarian restaurants.

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people and students, they eat unhealthy

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more often due to convenience and time pressure. Research in the US and the UK has shown that rising prices of

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are indeed not specifically linked to the prevalence of obesity.

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, I would argue that the availability of healthy

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is much more crucial than the tax on unhealthy

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. Equally worth mentioning is that

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increases are unfair to the poor and the average

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. It is undeniable that the poor spend much more on

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is much more than the rich. Raising the

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of sugary products is likely to increase the burden

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impoverished households and widen social inequalities. The problem can be exacerbated in the midst of soaring global inflation.

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of raising the

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of sugary

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products, it is more vital to lower the

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of healthy

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as organic

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and vegetables. In conclusion, I believe that

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with higher levels of sugar should not be made more expensive because it is ineffective and inequitable.

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, authorities should take steps to increase the availability and lower prices of healthy

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to curb

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problem.