You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter o give details of your study plans o explain why you want to get a part-time job o suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Zoe, I hope you are doing well in Singapore. I am writing
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letter to you as I would like you to know about my study plan
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National Technology University (NTU) Singapore and I want to ask you how to apply for part-time jobs.
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with, it is a great chance for me to get
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from
university
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in order to study
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Electronic -Engineering Courses as a full-time student and
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is for
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courses. As you know, the courses and accommodation fees in Singapore are very expensive.
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, I would like to do a part-time
job
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while I am studying in order to meet my basic needs. To be frank with you, I am not quite sure how to search or apply for a part-time
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.
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, I am pretty sure that you are able to help me since you have been working
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there for over five years and you could give me advice
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job
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applications that are useful especially for students to find a part-time
job
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. I hope you could help me
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this
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case and see you in the near future. Best Regards Sandar Myint
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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