You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter o give details of your study plans o explain why you want to get a part-time job o suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Zoe, I hope you are doing well in Singapore. I am writing
this
letter to you as I would like you to know about my study plan at National Technology University (NTU) Singapore and I want to ask you how to apply for part-time jobs.
To begin
with, it is a great chance for me to get an offer from the university in order to study Electronic -Engineering Courses as a full-time student and
this
is for two-year courses. As you know, the courses and accommodation fees in Singapore are very expensive.
Therefore
, I would like to do a part-time
job
while I am studying in order to meet my basic needs. To be frank with you, I am not quite sure how to search or apply for a part-time
job
.
Moreover
, I am pretty sure that you are able to help me since you have been working there for over five years and you could give me advice on some
job
applications that are useful especially for students to find a part-time
job
. I hope you could help me with
this
case and see you in the near future. Best Regards Sandar Myint
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