You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

As

it

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can be seen, there are two

pie

charts at the top which show

the

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Germany's electricity generation in general and

renewables

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renewable

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energy in 560

billion

kilowatt

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kilowatts

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. And at the bottom part, they have shown the same thing in 510

billion

kilowatt

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kilowatts

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. At the

first

glance, it's evident that in 560

billion

conventional thermals dominated the top left

pie

chart

by 59.6 per cent.

In addition

, nuclear had the 23% of all types

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chart

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charts

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and 17.4 percentage of the info had allocated to

renewables

energy .

Furthermore

, in

renewables

biomass

had the

first

place

with 39.3% .

A

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bit less

of

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the

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biomass

, the wind got 36.9 of the right top infographic . In fact, the rest of the

renewables

in

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560

billion

kilowatts got 23.1% at all . Coming to the bottom side, 510-kilowatt nuclear energy dominated the whole electricity generation by 76 % .

Furthermore

,

renewables

occupied the

second

place

with 13.7 % and the rest of the

pie

is for conventional thermal

by

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at

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10.3 %. which had decreased significantly from 560

B

to 510

B

and fell to

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third

place

from

first

. In fact,

renewables

had been changed dramatically from 560

B

to 510

B

.

Firstly

, hydroelectric

was

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massively dominated the

pie

chart

getting 80.5% which they came to

the

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first

place

from

third

place

.

Secondly

, the wind remained in

second

place

,

however

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,however

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it had decreased significantly from 36.9% to 10.5% .

Thirdly

,

biomass

had fallen to

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third

place

from

the

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first

place

, in other meaning

biomass

had changed from 39.3% to 8.1% . The rest of the

chart

was slightly similar to the previous one except that solar had lost 5.2 per cent and

geoth

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growth

has been added to the

pie

chart

which just got a very small amount of the

pie

chart

.