You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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As
it
can be seen, there are two Correct pronoun usage
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pie
charts at the top which show the
Germany's electricity generation in general and Correct article usage
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renewables
energy in 560 Change the noun form
renewable
billion
kilowatt
. And at the bottom part, they have shown the same thing in 510 Change to a plural noun
kilowatts
billion
kilowatt
.
At the Change to a plural noun
kilowatts
first
glance, it's evident that in 560 billion
conventional thermals dominated the top left pie
chart
by 59.6 per cent. In addition
, nuclear had the
23% of all types Change preposition
of chart
chart
and 17.4 percentage of the info had allocated to Fix the agreement mistake
charts
renewables
energy .
Furthermore
, in renewables
biomass
had the first
place
with 39.3% . A
bit less Change preposition
With a
of
Change preposition
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the
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biomass
, the wind got 36.9 of the right top infographic . In fact, the rest of the renewables
in
560 Change preposition
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billion
kilowatts got
23.1% at all .
Coming to the bottom side, 510-kilowatt nuclear energy dominated the whole electricity generation by 76 % . Furthermore
, renewables
occupied the second
place
with 13.7 % and the rest of the pie
is for conventional thermal by
10.3 %. which had decreased significantly from 560 Change preposition
at
B
to 510 B
and fell to the
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third
place
from first
. In fact, renewables
had been changed dramatically from 560 B
to 510 B
. Firstly
, hydroelectric was
massively dominated the Unnecessary verb
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pie
chart
getting 80.5% which they came to the
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first
place
from third
place
. Secondly
, the wind remained in second
place
, however
it had decreased significantly from 36.9% to 10.5% . Add a comma
,however
Thirdly
, biomass
had fallen to the
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third
place
from the
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first
place
, in other meaning biomass
had changed from 39.3% to 8.1% . The rest of the chart
was slightly similar to the previous one except that solar had lost 5.2 per cent and geoth
has been added to the Correct your spelling
growth
pie
chart
which just got a very small amount of the pie
chart
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, second, third".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, renewables, billion, first, chart, biomass, place, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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