Some people believe the government should spend money on building trains and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some individuals are of the

believe

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that the government should invest more money in

building

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the building

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of

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trains and subway

systems

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, in order to reduce the

rate

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of

traffic

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jam

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, while others are of the opinion that

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the construction

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of new and wider

roads

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is a more effective way of reducing

traffic

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congestion

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.

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essay thinks that

construction

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the construction

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of new

roads

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will help combat the

rate

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of

traffic

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jam

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jams

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and will discuss the advantages of building trains and

subway

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subways

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, as well as the merits of building more and wider

roads

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, when trains and subways are made, they can help in reducing the

number

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of

people

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utilizing the

roads

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, thereby , reducing the

rate

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at which there will be

congestions

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congestion

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on the

road

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, It has been observed that developed countries like the USA hardly suffer from

such

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problems,

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is because they have many

railway

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systems

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which are being effectively used by the citizens,leading to few

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number

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numbers

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of

people

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on the

road

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However

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in

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underdeveloped

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under developed

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countries like

nigeria

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where there are very few numbers of available

railway

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stations and

train

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trains

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, many citizens suffer on a daily basis, spending more hours on the

road

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.

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, In as much as

introduction

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of

railway

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systems

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will help to reduce the

rate

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of

congestion

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on the

road

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building of new and wider spaced

roads

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will be the best solution for tackling

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this

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this road congestion problem

these road congestion problems

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road

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congestion

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problems, as

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will help to curtail the

rate

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at which

traffic

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jam

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occurs in the country as a whole. Due to

limited

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amount of space available on the

roads

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, which

accomodates

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accommodates

only fewer numbers of vehicles, there tend to be

congestions

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congestion

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on the

road

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, as more and more motors

tries

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to force their way out ,

there by

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leading to a disorganized

road

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and more accidents

occurence

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occurrence

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, in places like

onitsha

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,

anambra

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state, where they only have small and narrowed

roads

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, it has been noticed that

people

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spends

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about

4hourd

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4 hours

on the

road

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, in a journey

that is

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not supposed to be more than 30-40 minutes.

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is because their

roads

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are so small to accommodate more

number

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of

people

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, thereby leading to the

road

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being

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jam-packed

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jam packed

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.When wider

roads

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are

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built

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builts

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built

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, there will be free

movements

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movement

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of vehicles and

less

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hours spent on the

road

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, leading to a

stress free

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life for the citizens. In conclusion, while some

suggests

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that

railway

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systems

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should be built as

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will help to reduce the

number

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of

people

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and vehicles on the

road

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,

this

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essay believes strongly that if new and wider

roads

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can be made,

this

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will

wil

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will

be the best solution to the reduction of

traffic

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congestion

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.