Some people believe the government should spend money on building trains and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some individuals are of the

believe

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that the government should invest more money in

building

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the building

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of

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apply

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trains and subway

systems

, in order to reduce the

rate

of

traffic

jam

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jams

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, while others are of the opinion that

construction

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the construction

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of new and wider

roads

is a more effective way of reducing

traffic

congestion

.

This

essay thinks that

construction

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the construction

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of new

roads

will help combat the

rate

of

traffic

jam

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jams

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and will discuss the advantages of building trains and

subway

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subways

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, as well as the merits of building more and wider

roads

.

Firstly

, when trains and subways are made, they can help in reducing the

number

of

people

utilizing the

roads

, thereby , reducing the

rate

at which there will be

congestions

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congestion

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on the

road

.

For instance

, It has been observed that developed countries like the USA hardly suffer from

such

problems,

this

is because they have many

railway

systems

which are being effectively used by the citizens,leading to few

number

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numbers

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of

people

on the

road

.

However

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in

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underdeveloped

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under developed

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underdeveloped

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countries like

nigeria

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Nigeria

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where there are very few numbers of available

railway

stations and

train

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trains

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, many citizens suffer on a daily basis, spending more hours on the

road

.

On the other hand

, In as much as

introduction

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the introduction

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of

railway

systems

will help to reduce the

rate

of

congestion

on the

road

building of new and wider spaced

roads

will be the best solution for tackling

this

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this road congestion problem

these road congestion problems

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road

congestion

problems, as

this

will help to curtail the

rate

at which

traffic

jam

occurs in the country as a whole. Due to

limited

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the limited

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amount of space available on the

roads

, which

accomodates

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accommodates

only fewer numbers of vehicles, there tend to be

congestions

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congestion

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on the

road

, as more and more motors

tries

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try

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to force their way out ,

there by

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thereby

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leading to a disorganized

road

and more accidents

occurence

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occurrence

.

For instance

, in places like

onitsha

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,

anambra

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Anambra

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state, where they only have small and narrowed

roads

, it has been noticed that

people

spends

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about

4hourd

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4 hours

on the

road

, in a journey

that is

not supposed to be more than 30-40 minutes.

This

is because their

roads

are so small to accommodate more

number

of

people

, thereby leading to the

road

being

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jam-packed

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jam packed

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jam-packed

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.When wider

roads

are

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built

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builts

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built

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, there will be free

movements

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movement

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of vehicles and

less

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fewer

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hours spent on the

road

, leading to a

stress free

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stress-free

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life for the citizens. In conclusion, while some

suggests

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suggest

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that

railway

systems

should be built as

this

will help to reduce the

number

of

people

and vehicles on the

road

,

this

essay believes strongly that if new and wider

roads

can be made,

this

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will

wil

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will

be the best solution to the reduction of

traffic

congestion

.